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March 7th, 2017, 11:51 pm

Well... This is Awkward...

Alright, this should have been decided ages ago, but I will not be continuing the Fool's Election miniarc.



WHY?!?!? WHAT IS THIS MADNESS?!!? EXPLAIN YOURSELF, STARMAN!!!!
Mainly that I didn't think it through and had a pretty poor plot overall.

The plot would have been as follows:

-Election introduced on TV
-Starman and Dennis are for Ned
-Ned drops out, due to being blackmailed by "an anonymous" gary party member
-This leads Dennis to run in Ned's position
-Dennis's campaign is mostly just slamming Gary
-The election results: Oak wins!
-Dennis is like "at least gary lost so that's a win for me"
-Then insert some gag saying that the presidency means literally next to nothing as the league basically runs the region
-Either that gag or I was gonna end it in chaos under oak's reign and then make it an "it was all a dream" sort of thing.

Naturally, I felt unsatisfied with what I had come up with and so I've been putting it off for this long. That isn't good. I have removed the first page of that arc. I might revisit this ridiculously stupid filler, but that'll be when I have more content plot-wise and game progress-wise, and a better understanding on how to make a decent plot. Of course if it is ever revisited, the timing will probably not make sense.

Good news is that I did get a fixed tablet a while back if I never mentioned it before, and AFE turns 1 year old in a week. I wonder what will happen then...

Please bear with me and my bad work ethic
-Starmanfan

Comments:

Ian Evans, March 8th, 2017, 1:15 am

>thinks about making fun of you for discontinuing an ancient arc that was never updated anyway
>remembers that I haven't updated in a month

Starmanfan, March 8th, 2017, 5:12 pm

>is the same

FinalFanatic, March 8th, 2017, 7:12 pm

That sucks dude, look forward to reading the rest of what you've got in store though :)

TheJGamer, March 8th, 2017, 11:02 pm

1 year already? Holy crud, AFE's much older than MFN! Happy early anniversary dude!

On the arc removal: I'm cool with that decision, bro.

TheJGamer, March 8th, 2017, 11:02 pm

@Ian Evans: yep

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